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The Man
ContentActually had fun with this idea, gonna remove it and mess around with it until im ready to unleash it on the world!!! This Piece is based on the Prompt: Vonnegut's Rules |
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bill | posted 19-Nov-2008 9:47am I finally had a chance to read this... lol. I enjoyed the over-the-top, pulpy style. I've been reading some Conan stories recently and there's a fair bit of similarity. Though, you also used first person, unlike Conan. Anyway, I think stuff like this is enjoyable and easy to read. Leaving Punk 3 out there was a nice touch. Though, it seems that The Man could easily kick his ass. I had to change my browser's text encoding from Unicode to Western European to get some of the special characters to render (I was seeing squares for the angled double quotes and such). ...no big deal |
| chad | posted 20-Nov-2008 2:21pm This kind of stuff is really fun to write. While punk 3 physically may be no match for The Man, he has the tools and resources available to make it interesting. |
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